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#17086 - 12/28/08 04:39 PM Black House
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original song for Karla


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#17093 - 12/28/08 05:54 PM Re: Black House [Re: Satansfarm]
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I hate it, and love it at the same time. Eh, maybe I'm bipolar or something. I think it might need a bit more lirics to it. Kind of hard to understand the words too with the thing on your face; all though I do like the Ninja-esk look a lot.
Cool voice as well.
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#17107 - 12/28/08 10:13 PM Re: Black House [Re: Asmedious]
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I kind of liked it. If you could redo it with some amplification of the vocals, it would be better. I could hardly make out any of the lyrics. But the voice fit rather well. If I were Simon, I would give you a gold ticket to Hollywood, but I would emphasize better vocalization.
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#17122 - 12/29/08 03:35 AM Re: Black House [Re: fakepropht]
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Yes, I get the vocal thing. I did this video this morning. I think I have a flu bug coming on.
I will print the words>>>>

woke up hungry
spent all my breakfast money
on a journey to your Black house
skinny blonde rocknroller
thinkin that yer mod
i don give a damn
cuz i aint got no job
im starin at thewindow
at the numbers flashin by
motor runnin stomach grumblin thinkin that youre mine

some say it was a whorehouse in 1941
all i know is whe i got there
your black house was gone...

thats the first verse
sorry about the caps
but i am really sick now
i have to go to bed

more later.....

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#17174 - 12/30/08 12:04 AM Re: Black House [Re: Satansfarm]
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Karla had red hair when I met her last year.

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#17348 - 12/31/08 02:52 PM Re: Black House [Re: Morgan]
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get off in the area
weird looks in the street
passin by this vacant lot
overgrown with weeds
no ones got to tell me
what the hells goin on
any fool can plainly see
that your black house is gone

chorus

well
im sittin at the bus stop eatin chips and gettin sick
bladder rumblin stumblin grumblin
better go find a tree real quick
busted now i really
fade into a dream
thought i was mario andretti
but i cant stand the smell of gasoline

chorus

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#17350 - 12/31/08 02:57 PM Re: Black House [Re: Satansfarm]
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Its just a recording using the built in mic and camera in my computer.
Im just not one to go through alot to record music
Im very fond of old blues records
and my sound reflects that.
I dare you to figure out whhat the heck John Lee Hooker, Howling Wolf, Robert Johnson was saying half the time.

I could use more technically perfect diction, but then I would lose the deep tone and I would sound like a dweeb.

ah...how how haow hoaw...oooohhhyeah...hmmmhmm hmm hmmm...

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